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Thursday, 15 August 2019

Of Course I Yell A Lot

Pizza is a circle
BBQ sauce is a sauce 
Pizza base is at the bottom of the pizza 
I have salami on my pizza 
Beef and onions with mayonnaise
From Domino’s 


I like playing Video games
I play video games in solitude
I play Red Dead Redemption 2
But my character got tuberculosis
He’s overweight at the moment
I’ll get a new character soon

A basketball is a sphere
You move a lot playing basketball 
Running around a lot
Your pulse goes faster
I drink a lot of water
So I don’t get dehydrated

I want to be a better person
I want to have self-acceptance
I should just be nicer
At home I have to yell a lot
Because of Myles
He’s annoying


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 12:44

    Hi Riliey!
    Your poem is AMAZING :-)
    My favourite part is:
    "He's overweight,
    I'll get a new character soon"
    Next time, I'd like to see you connect the verses in more creative ways

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  2. Anonymous15 August 2019 at 12:49

    Very interested and l think the blog on the pizza is very attracted

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